A blog for the summer 2016 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Monday, September 12, 2016
Nicole - Brochure & Pocket Folder
For the pocket folder I decided to relate it to the brochure just for consistency. Let me know how you feel about the logo on the front cover with the large stroke around it that allowed me to put it over the blue green shape.
Nicole I really like how this brochure has come out! I think your inside is complete! I like how the corners of the photos are hidden under the triangular shapes, as if they are in pockets like in a pocket folder. And I think you made great use of your space both with text and images!
For your cover, what if you pulled down the logo to the center of the page? Now that you have the white stroke around it, it will not get lost in the green color. Because right now there is a large space between the logo and the quote on the bottom, so I feel if you push the logo to the middle, it will even out the space.
Nicole I really like how this brochure has come out! I think your inside is complete! I like how the corners of the photos are hidden under the triangular shapes, as if they are in pockets like in a pocket folder. And I think you made great use of your space both with text and images!
ReplyDeleteFor your cover, what if you pulled down the logo to the center of the page? Now that you have the white stroke around it, it will not get lost in the green color. Because right now there is a large space between the logo and the quote on the bottom, so I feel if you push the logo to the middle, it will even out the space.
Great work!
Yep - looks like this brochure is done - unless you wanted to pull that logo down a bit... maybe not to the middle, but down a bit further.
ReplyDeleteYou see how the G is cut in a diagonal line, see if you can have that G in squeegee follow the the diagonal line of the background design.
ReplyDeletegreat design layout. however as the post above, I will change the position of the logo on the brochure and the pocket folder
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