A blog for the summer 2016 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
I'm liking the look and feel of this. The squares/rectangles have kind of a "techy" feel to them which I feel gives it a modern look, but I am wondering the reasoning behind them. What do they mean or what are they supposed to represent? Or do you just like the design? Just curious. But the colors go great. The logo works on all documents. I like the design of the business card very much. The design also makes everything fun! I would be an excited customer to receive a letter in that envelope :p Very nice work!
I really like the pattern that you've created for your brand. The only thing that I think looks a little off is the return address on the envelope. It could be the x-height of the font or just its size, but if feels a little small and spaced out.
Ophelia – The logo is done, and you are starting to build around it with other elements. Caution is needed!! As I look at the projects here, I see that the back of these projects is dominating the front. Is that what you really want me to see – the back of them? I like that you are considering the backs important (why not, they are part of the whole package) but currently that bright blue is too busy, too bright, and too dominant. Consider a much lighter version of the blue and I think it will be nice. Why not a light gradient blend, to unite with the logo icon?
I think Eleni asks a good question “What do these interlocking rectangles mean? They should signify something about this company… some repeated shape that exists in the process??”
Business Card: Please force “Somerville” to sit down a line, next to the zip code where it belongs (and it will help fill out that bottom line).
Letterhead: I’m not sure I understand the addresses in upper right. It appears as if there are 2, one for BossFlex and one for Mrs. Helen Jones. Please use “Valeria Moss” as President (so it matches the business card), with the address of BossFlex below her name. I assume the changes you will do to the back of the envelope will carry over onto the back of this letterhead.
Front of Envelope: Must move BossFlex address up under logo icon… can’t sit at bottom right – postal service will not accept this. You don’t need name or phone number… just a complete street address for this.
I like the design element that you added to the bottom of the letterhead, I think that it really works, and adds to the design. Also the fact that you designed your envelops is awesome.
I like the design element that you added to the bottom of the letterhead, I think that it really works, and adds to the design. Also the fact that you designed your envelops is awesome.
Ophelia
ReplyDeleteI'm liking the look and feel of this. The squares/rectangles have kind of a "techy" feel to them which I feel gives it a modern look, but I am wondering the reasoning behind them. What do they mean or what are they supposed to represent? Or do you just like the design? Just curious. But the colors go great. The logo works on all documents. I like the design of the business card very much. The design also makes everything fun! I would be an excited customer to receive a letter in that envelope :p
Very nice work!
I really like the pattern that you've created for your brand. The only thing that I think looks a little off is the return address on the envelope. It could be the x-height of the font or just its size, but if feels a little small and spaced out.
ReplyDeleteOphelia – The logo is done, and you are starting to build around it with other elements. Caution is needed!! As I look at the projects here, I see that the back of these projects is dominating the front. Is that what you really want me to see – the back of them? I like that you are considering the backs important (why not, they are part of the whole package) but currently that bright blue is too busy, too bright, and too dominant. Consider a much lighter version of the blue and I think it will be nice. Why not a light gradient blend, to unite with the logo icon?
ReplyDeleteI think Eleni asks a good question “What do these interlocking rectangles mean? They should signify something about this company… some repeated shape that exists in the process??”
Business Card: Please force “Somerville” to sit down a line, next to the zip code where it belongs (and it will help fill out that bottom line).
Letterhead: I’m not sure I understand the addresses in upper right. It appears as if there are 2, one for BossFlex and one for Mrs. Helen Jones. Please use “Valeria Moss” as President (so it matches the business card), with the address of BossFlex below her name. I assume the changes you will do to the back of the envelope will carry over onto the back of this letterhead.
Front of Envelope: Must move BossFlex address up under logo icon… can’t sit at bottom right – postal service will not accept this. You don’t need name or phone number… just a complete street address for this.
Nice mock up!
I like the design element that you added to the bottom of the letterhead, I think that it really works, and adds to the design. Also the fact that you designed your envelops is awesome.
ReplyDeleteI like the design element that you added to the bottom of the letterhead, I think that it really works, and adds to the design. Also the fact that you designed your envelops is awesome.
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