A blog for the summer 2016 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Ophelia: It’s good that you are thinking about what could go into the pocket folder. I will be interested to see how the pencil and eraser will be secured inside it. Make sure to think this through.
I’m unclear about the die cut, and what it will reveal. Please “make” this by using plain paper and cutting away the areas you have in mind. Let’s take a look at this in class.
I still think the blue is too bright and dominant in this design.
Logo: I question the color of the type below your icon. Is teal or blue the best choice? I don’t know, but I think it’s important that you take a good look at this question.
Ophelia: It’s good that you are thinking about what could go into the pocket folder. I will be interested to see how the pencil and eraser will be secured inside it. Make sure to think this through.
ReplyDeleteI’m unclear about the die cut, and what it will reveal. Please “make” this by using plain paper and cutting away the areas you have in mind. Let’s take a look at this in class.
I still think the blue is too bright and dominant in this design.
Logo: I question the color of the type below your icon. Is teal or blue the best choice? I don’t know, but I think it’s important that you take a good look at this question.