A blog for the summer 2016 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Saturday, September 10, 2016
Eleni - Roto Brochure Changes
So I made a few adjustments after critique from the previous layout I posted. Let me know what you guys think! Thanks!
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(the white circle is just to signify where the actual cutout shape will be)
Eleni - this looks terrific. My only suggestion is to not allow hyphenation in that very short paragraph on the inside front cover, and consider a dark blue rather than black for the background. It seems that your palette is primarily blue and white - so why not allow a dark saturated blue to sit on inside front cover?
Eleni, Your brochure has come along so nicely, I don't have much of a suggestion for change. However, I would consider what Coni said about having a nice blue on the inside front cover.
Eleni - this looks terrific. My only suggestion is to not allow hyphenation in that very short paragraph on the inside front cover, and consider a dark blue rather than black for the background. It seems that your palette is primarily blue and white - so why not allow a dark saturated blue to sit on inside front cover?
ReplyDeleteEleni,
ReplyDeleteYour brochure has come along so nicely, I don't have much of a suggestion for change. However, I would consider what Coni said about having a nice blue on the inside front cover.