A blog for the summer 2016 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
I think you did a really good job with your brochure. However I can't tell what kind of fold this is. To me , and please correct me if I'm wrong, it looks like it can be folded up into a box is that what you were going for?
Yes, I have the same question as Elizabeth - will this end up a box? Please print this tomorrow before our class so we can understand the panels and folding pattern. On a quick glance, I'm wondering where the nice logo appears in this brochure? Also, the content at the bottom on the front page probably needs some rewriting - so let's look at that carefully too.
I love the page with the image inside the blue boxes! I think this is your cover? If so, I think I would make your logo a lot bigger so we see your company. I like that you're keeping the theme of the rounded squares throughout the brochure, but it makes an odd shape when they hit the edges and make straight angles and sides. What if you kept the rounded squares and used that as the shape of your brochure? So rather than straight angled edges, your brochure would have rounded edges? Just an idea. But really great work so far!
Ophelia - AS Elizabeth asked, what the format of your brochure...I just have a chance to look at it right now can you upload a picture of it if you have printed a sample. however it looks good. and I will prefer the cutted picture in the box in color. Great job
Hi Opelia,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job with your brochure. However I can't tell what kind of fold this is. To me , and please correct me if I'm wrong, it looks like it can be folded up into a box is that what you were going for?
Yes, I have the same question as Elizabeth - will this end up a box? Please print this tomorrow before our class so we can understand the panels and folding pattern. On a quick glance, I'm wondering where the nice logo appears in this brochure? Also, the content at the bottom on the front page probably needs some rewriting - so let's look at that carefully too.
ReplyDeleteOphelia,
ReplyDeleteI love the page with the image inside the blue boxes! I think this is your cover? If so, I think I would make your logo a lot bigger so we see your company. I like that you're keeping the theme of the rounded squares throughout the brochure, but it makes an odd shape when they hit the edges and make straight angles and sides. What if you kept the rounded squares and used that as the shape of your brochure? So rather than straight angled edges, your brochure would have rounded edges? Just an idea. But really great work so far!
Ophelia - AS Elizabeth asked, what the format of your brochure...I just have a chance to look at it right now can you upload a picture of it if you have printed a sample. however it looks good. and I will prefer the cutted picture in the box in color.
ReplyDeleteGreat job